Hello Lieutenant Major Taylor, J.A., my name is Jesus Alejandro Hernandez, I'm a ROTC Cadet at General George S. Patton Academy, I have chosen to right to you is because I, myself plan on joining the military as apart of my career choice before i continue my education, but that is a side point, I'm sending you this letter because i want to show my gratitude and admiration towards your actions while you were serving in the Vietnam war, because i can't imagine ever doing all the things you have done. after all your service to our country i hope that you are in well living conditions, hopefully around your family, friends, and comrades.For that i thank you.
Well wishes,
Private Jesus A. Hernandez
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3 comments:
good letter but you didn't thank him for his hard work. but i like that you are pursuiting your dreams.
I loved the way you espressed your self, but the thing I liked the most was that you were sctually sincere in your letter!!!Tip: Next time try to capitalized some of your words..:)
Well jesus, U could have been a little more specific about what your recipient did for the war. You should also put more periods to seperate some of those long sentences. It was a pretty decent letter overall though :)
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